
The Echo
Michael Mirolla
The forest collapses into dust. I stand knee-deep in the grey ash and feel elated. Slowly, with no further movement, the dust in the air settles and everything becomes clear. Not twenty metres away, on the crest of the mountain, set in a slight hollow, impossible to miss or mistake, the giant one-eyed machine whirs. I blink. It blinks. The eye, filled with mucous membrane, re-opens lazily. In it, I stand in the middle of a wondrous green forest, on the top of a mountain, in a slight hollow, looking at a giant machine. No lights flash on this machine, no switches, no wires, no electrical outlets or signs of antennae. Only dull grey metal and the huge eye. It squats in the centre of the collapsed universe talking in its undecipherable language, in its tuneless monotony.
I sit down before it, feel the electro-magnetic force align me. The machine’s eye re-lives my past, tracing the patterns of my choices from the moment I was conscious of them. And I observe and note, without hysterics, that the machine is going beyond the present, is, in fact, plotting my future. It flashes through my mind that I might be perverse and not follow this map. But that is being childish. In fact, the machine has already recorded my intended rebellion.
Mathematical symbols and figures roll across the eye, explanations of some sort. I understand very few of them: simple arithmetic signs, perhaps, delta increments, integration. I arise and, with no apparent anger or malice, strike the eye with my spear. Inside the eye, a man with one good arm strikes the eye of the machine. And another within that. Nothing happens. The multitude of eyes simply blink — one after the other in a sequence that eventually brings back the original eye. There isn’t even the hint of a scratch. I search for an opening in the metal in the hope of prying it open. Nowhere a seal, bolt or rivet.
I sit down again, prepared to stay there until the machine opens or I too turn to dust. But that isn’t to be. For the forest begins to re-grow, at first shimmering in and out of existence but then firmly re-established, firmly rooted. Perhaps it has never decayed in the first place. The birds resume in mid-song, not missing a note or a worm; the dust quickens to earth; the stars come out again; creatures spring out fully formed as if through an invisible curtain. In the distance, a woman comes out of a cabin, tosses out a chamber pot and goes back in. I knew her once. Will I know her again? In front of me, the machine stops whirring. For a moment, it and the forest balance, balance perfectly. But then it is gone. Trees sway in its place.
AUTHOR BIO
The author of more than two dozen novels, plays, film scripts and short story and poetry collections, MICHAEL MIROLLA’s publications include a novella, The Last News Vendor, winner of the 2020 Hamilton Literary Award, as well as three Bressani Prizes: the novel Berlin; the poetry collection The House on 14th Avenue; and the short story collection Lessons in Relationship Dyads. His latest poetry collection, At the End of the World, was short-listed for the 2022 Hamilton Literary Award and took second prize for the Di Cicco Poetry Award. His latest short story collection Becker’s Universe & Other Stories was published in the spring of 2024 (Black Moss Press). In the fall of 2019, Michael served a three-month writers residency at the Historic Joy Kogawa House in Vancouver where he worked on the first draft of a novel, The Second Law of Thermodynamics. A symposium on Michael’s writing was held in Toronto on May 25, 2023. In September of 2023, Michael took part in a writers residency in Olot, Catalonia. While there, he polished a novella, How About This …?, which is scheduled for publication in September 2025 (At Bay Press). In July 2024, Michael participated in a month-long writers residency in Barcelona. From September 2024-June 2025, Michael is the WIR for the Regina Public Library. Apart from his writing, Michael works as an editor and is the publisher and editor-in-chief of Guernica Editions, a Canadian literary book publisher. Born in Italy and growing up in Montreal, with side trips to Glen Robertson (ON), Gboko (Nigeria), Vancouver, Mount Forest (ON), Toronto, Oakville, Hamilton, and Regina, Michael now makes his home outside the town of Gananoque in the Thousand Islands area of Ontario.
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